Protect Me too

Ok this is an Updated version of Protect me. If you didnt see the first shot of it, I took all the comments in consideration. This is what I came up with. Input is still much appreciated. About the comment for the addition of more color. One of the Criteria is that it has to be Duotone. I have no idea why. Thank you to those that helped me with this.
Keep the comments comming

James